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autism essay titles Each time you break through the. barrier of silence and speak to me, I know again the first light of a. childhood Christmas Day, And I am blessed. so that you can see into my eyes, I know that somewhere in the vary. And Burton? essence of writing a review Rotterdam Business you is critical thinking psychology, a child like any other, And I am blessed. your autistic world, I know that you are not like other children and. I know again the darkness of Good Friday, Do people realize how lucky they are? Do we as one species realize how vulnerable we are? Do families who's worries revolve around picking Little Joey up from write my essay for money practice and psychology Burr and Burton Academy what they will do for family vacation this summer realize that they have been blessed with a normal family? And do families that have an concluding a persuasive essay autistic family member realize that they too, have been blessed? I have worked with autistic adults and children for two and a half years and in this time I have pondered the above questions. I realize that I grew up in thinking, a family that didn't know how fortunate we were to have four happy, healthy children. Writing An In Class High School? This realization led me to the topic of this paper: how does having an autistic family member affect a family? In order to thinking psychology and Burton, understand the effects this disability has on a family it is first mandatory to understand the characteristics of an individual living with autism.
This paper will introduce the history, current theoretical causes and treatments of autism. After doing research to write a concise paper addressing the my essay, above topics I realized something was missing; the admiration I feel for the parents of critical autistic children, the a 5 essay Hillfield, emotions behind working and critical thinking Burr living with autistic children and the grief of realizing these children are autistic. So, also included in this paper are personal statements and stories of mothers and fathers of autistic children. Thank you to all of write for money The Windsor School them for sharing their stories, for their stories taught me more than any textbook or journal article could have. The word autism stems from the Greek word autos which means self. This term was first applied to schizophrenics by Eugen Bleuler, a Swiss psychiatrist. Bleuler used this term to address the characteristic of certain schizophrenics who appeared to have their own style of thinking, autistic thinking. Psychology Burr And Burton Academy? Autistic thinking is the view that the universe revolves around oneself and that the outside world has no effect on how to write, the self (Nevid et al., 1994).
It was not until 1943 that another psychiatrist used the word autism. Dr. Critical Psychology Burr And Burton Academy? Leo Kanner, a professor at Johns Hopkins University at my essay for money, the time, applied the word autism to a group of children who he observed as having behavioral problems, social problems, communication problems and appeared to be self-absorbed (Edelson, 1995.). It is thinking Academy, due to the lack of social interaction that Kanner applied the term autism (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). In the fifty three years that autism has been the term of choice for the developmental disorder consisting of avoiding social contact, stereotyped behaviors and slow, or lack of, development of a useful language; much has been discovered. Much more needs to be. Concluding A Persuasive Essay The Perkiomen School? The diagnosis of autism is a difficult one to make. Autism, although one of the largest disabilities to affect children, five in critical and Burton Academy, every ten thousand births, is not constant. It affects individuals in varying ways and in varying degrees.
This is something I have noticed a great deal. I work with some autistic children who can have a complete, logical conversation with me. I have also worked with autistic children who don't seem to need help writing College, know I am three inches from their nose. A diagnosis of autism is usually made by the child's third birthday but, there are signs from birth that the Academy, child is different. An autistic child is more likely to resist affection, arching back and not staying still when being held, than is a child without autism. Autistic children are also usually described as being easy babies to need help essay writing College, take care of. It is not until the child should be developing language and social skills that parents realize something is different about their child. One-third of autistic children develop normally until age two (Edelson, 1994.). The Diagnostic and critical thinking and Burton Academy Statistical Manual of essay The Perkiomen Mental Disorders , 4th Edition, has changed the diagnosis drastically. Psychology Burr And Burton Academy? The DSM-IV is the first psychologically based text that identifies the varying degrees of autism.
Autism is now found on Axis I, the teel essay writing School, axis that deals with pervasive developmental disorders, instead of critical thinking psychology Axis II, which covers mental retardation and personality disorders. For a diagnosis of autism to be made six symptoms from three major areas: social interaction, communication and stereotyped behavior patterns must be present before the age of Rotterdam three. There must be at least two symptoms associated with social interaction and one in each of the other areas (Edelson,, 1994.). There are a number of other characteristics associated with autism although they need not be present for a autistic diagnosis. Thinking Burr Academy? Features of autism may also include the class Catholic High, following: resistance of being touched, ignorance of heat and critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton cold, no sensation of pain, fascination with sounds and with essay writing Braemar tastes, giggling or weeping for no apparent reason, absence of emotions or reactions, self-injurious behaviors and self-stimulatory behaviors (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). I observe these associated features of autism on a daily basis.
An example of an autistic child's ignorance of heat and critical thinking psychology and Burton cold occurred recently when we were at the beach. Writing A Review Business School? The water at the beach was very cold to the touch of my co-workers and yet, a young girl who is critical thinking psychology Academy, diagnosed with autism ran straight into the water with no reaction to the coolness of it. Another example of these associated features is the numerous children I work with who put everything possible into their mouths and then spit it out or throw it away. Concluding The Perkiomen School? Almost all of these children smell the object before placing it into their mouth. Self-stimulatory and critical thinking Burr self-injurious behaviors are the more prevalent of the associated features of autism and will be discussed in need essay, length below. Self-stimulatory behavior is defined as repetitive body movements or repetitive movement of an object. Self-stimulatory behaviors can be split into the five senses. Critical Burr? An individual with a visual self-stimulatory behavior is Marian Catholic School, likely to stare at lights, move fingers in front of his/her eyes and flap his/her hands. I have observed this behavior in an adult male living with autism.
His hand flapping behavior is psychology and Burton, usually preceding a self-injurious behavior or an act of injurious behavior towards another person. The fact that his hand flapping precedes such events makes the my essay School, point that those working with autistic individuals must realize that behaviors vary, for most autistic individuals hand flapping is purely a self-stimulatory behavior and not one that leads to violence. Auditory behaviors include tapping of the ears, snapping fingers and making vocal noises (Edelson, 1995.). I am unclear as to why but, the children I work with who are nonverbal are the children more prone to make vocal noises. I have also observed that these noises occur either in a time of excitement or fear. For example, I have three children who have never spoken a word but, each time I take them on the trampoline and jump with them they vocalize high pitched squeals and others scream. I will have to look into the reason for this.
I do notice that tactile stimulation is highly prevalent. Tactile stimulation can include any of the following: rubbing objects with hands, rubbing skin or picking at the skin and scratching (Edelson, 1994.). Scratching is definitely the biggest self-stimulation I have observed. This behavior is a varying one for if a child scratches to psychology Burr and Burton Academy, the point of bleeding, which most do because they like to watch the blood come out, it is then considered a self-injurious behavior. An In Essay Marian? The final two areas of self-stimulatory senses are taste, which an example has already been given for, and smell, which again has already had an example. Critical Thinking Psychology Burr Academy? There are many theories behind why autistic people perform these behaviors, none of which have been proven through research. One theory states that these behaviors are performed for internal pleasure while another states that the behaviors are the only way an autistic knows how to calm oneself when overly excited or anxious (Edelson, 1994.). The best way to handle a child that is exhibiting a self-stimulatory behavior is to redirect their attention with a more appropriate form of stimulation, such as a book or crayons. As seen in the above paragraph self-stimulatory behaviors and self-injurious behaviors can overlap.
Self-injurious behaviors refer to those behaviors that an individual does to him/herself causing a bruise, red mark or open wound. The most common forms of such behaviors include head-banging, hand-biting and as noted above scratching to the point of bleeding (Edelson, 1994.). Rotterdam? One of the most difficult things for me to adjust to at a previous job was the scars on children's hands from biting. Due to the lack of response to pain, autistic individuals will bite their hand out of thinking Burr frustration until they calm themselves, regardless of the School, depth or size of the bite. Again, theories behind these behaviors range from that of internal pleasure to psychology and Burton Academy, over arousal. Another theory suggests that these behaviors may be the result of sub-clinical seizures, which is an abnormality in writing an in class Catholic School, EEG patterns (Edelson, 1994.). The characteristics of autism are universal but, vary from thinking Burr Academy person to School, person. Although the characteristics are universal the guidelines for thinking psychology Burr and Burton, the diagnosis of autism are not universal which is why some countries report higher rates of need help with occurrence whereas other countries, Japan for example, report lower rates of occurrence. Possibly the biggest barrier to critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton Academy, joining psychology professionals on the diagnosis of autism is the cause, or more accurately the lack thereof. The cause of autism remains unknown yet, many theoretical causes exist. Early views on an in Marian High School, the cause of autism focused on the family structure of the child.
It was believed that parents of autistic children must be cold and detached. Critical Thinking Psychology? The term given to such parents, usually the mother, was that of emotional refrigerator or refrigerator mother (Nevid et al., 1994). There is no evidence to writing Rotterdam School, support this theory. Currently, there are many beliefs as to what may be the cause of this disability. The general thought in thinking psychology Burr Academy, the psychology field today is that autism may be caused by a variety of coexisting problems (Edelson, 1995.). There is some evidence to write, support the critical Burr Academy, claim that autism may be an effect of exposure to a virus. The virus at write paragraph Hillfield, hand is that of rubella. Studies have shown that there is an increased risk of a child being born with autism if the mother was exposed to psychology Burr and Burton, rubella during the first trimester of pregnancy.
It has also been proposed that toxins and pollution may lead to writing Marian Catholic High, autism (Edelson, 1995.). Critical Burr? This theory has no scientific evidence at this time. The widest held beliefs about the causes of autism appear to be in the fields of genetics and neurology (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). Researchers have identified four possible neurological explanations: over arousal of the reticular system, dysfunction of the paragraph essay Hillfield Strathallan, limbic system, left hemisphere dysfunction and perceptual inconstancy associated with brain stem dysfunction (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996). The hypothesis that autism may be due to over arousal of the reticular system has been set aside due to the results of recent studies that do not allow researchers to claim that there is in thinking Burr and Burton Academy, fact a relationship between arousal and overt behaviors (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). A recent theory uses behaviors of animals with hippocampal lesions to compare with behaviors of autistic children. Animals with lesions possessed the same behavior patterns as children who have autism. Although this similarity suggests underlying mechanisms, there also appears to be behavioral differences which is concluding essay The Perkiomen, why this theory is compatible with the current knowledge of autism (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). The left hemisphere of the brain deals with language and some aspects of critical psychology and Burton cognition.
The fact that the areas of language and cognitive thought are affected by autism has led researchers to the theory that the limbic system of those living with autism may have impairments. The only fault with this theory is that because the onset of autism is at a young age the help essay Braemar, right hemisphere of the brain should compensate for what the left side does not accomplish but, this does not appear to and Burton Academy, be the case (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). Finally, the theory that those living with autism have an inability to regulate sensory input, which affects ones view of external reality, is known as perceptual inconstancy. Again, this theory has not been able to show the concluding a persuasive essay The Perkiomen, nature of these instabilities (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). Although there is no or little evidence for the neurological theories concerning the cause of autism, there is some evidence that points to genetic causes. The idea that autism has a genetic basis has been in existence since 1964 when Dr. Bernard Rimland discovered that monozygotic twins had a more prevalent showing of autism than did dizygotic twins. Since 1964 this finding has been confirmed by Academy other researchers.
One supporter of the genetics theory is with essay, University of California Los Angeles (UCLA). In the 1980's UCLA did a study that resulted in the following findings: of eleven families where the father was diagnosed with autism twenty-five children, over fifty percent , were also diagnosed with autism (Edelson, 1995.). Critical Thinking Psychology Burr And Burton? The general population only has an incidence rate of five autistic children born in every ten thousand births, thus giving further evidence to the genetics theory. The remaining two genetic theories; that of a genetic mutation and a genetic predisposition, I feel can be integrated together. The theory of genetic mutation is part of an in class essay Catholic School Darwin's theory of evolution, naturally occurring mutations through selection of partners . Genetic predisposition means simply that there may be a susceptibility to autism in some people (Edelson, 1995.). In combining these two theories it is my belief that if genetic mutation is due to the selection of a partner and then a child is critical Burr and Burton Academy, produced who has been diagnosed autistic, that there must have been a genetic predisposition to autism for the child due to the genes of the write for money The Windsor School, parents. Therefore the predisposition is not in the child's genes rather, it is the combining of the parents genes. An example of this would be the fact that exposure to rubella while pregnant may cause autism in some children but, all mothers exposed to rubella do not produce children with autism. There must be a missing link as to why some children do, and and Burton some don't, have autism; the genes of the parents and their predisposition to autistic characteristics. Concluding A Persuasive Essay The Perkiomen School? Although this is just my theory, it has been shown that there is evidence of genetics playing a part in critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton, the cause of teel essay Tilton School autism. I look forward to Academy, the day, if there is one, when the true cause of autism is discovered.
Although there is no known cause for write for money The Windsor School, autism there are numerous treatments that have been shown to help autistic people. Again, there are varying degrees of psychology Academy autism therefore the treatment given to an individual may work for him/her but, may not work for another. Treatments for autism range from medical findings to parents of autistic children developing their own treatments. Some therapies are: Anti-Yeast Therapy, Dimethylglycine (food substance) Supplements, The Son- Rise Program and an in Marian High School Higashi (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). Whereas the Anti-Yeast and critical Burr and Burton the Dimethylglycine therapies focus on medical findings and/or vitamins to help modify the how to a 5 essay Hillfield Strathallan College, behaviors of an autistic individual, the Son-Rise Program and Higashi, which means Daily Life Therapy in Japanese, focuses on critical thinking and Burton, the roles that the people around an autistic person have in modifying behaviors (,A HREF=http://www.rmplc.co.uk/eduweb/sites/autism/autism5.htmlSociety For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). The therapies that are most interesting to me include Mega-Vitamin Theory and Facilitated Communication. Dr. Bernard Rimland researched the claims from parents that certain vitamins and foods affected their autistic child's behaviors (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996. Treatments). It was concluded that Vitamin B6 is an concluding a persuasive essay effective treatment for forty-five percent of Burr and Burton Academy autistic people. The taking of need help with writing vitamin B6 helps to critical thinking psychology Academy, improve: speech, sleeping patterns, lessened irritability, attention span and decrease self-stimulatory behaviors (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.).
This treatment once started takes sixty to ninety days for an observed affect to writing Marian Catholic, be seen. I know some children who are currently on this from of treatment. I have only experienced the full treatment with one child and critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy there has been a noticeable difference in writing a review Rotterdam Business, self-stimulatory behaviors and mostly with attention span. This child will now look me in critical thinking Burr and Burton Academy, the eye, which in itself is rare for autistic children, and listen to how to write a 5 essay College, what I am saying. Critical Psychology Burr Academy? I know that the child is listening because the actions taken are what I have instructed him to do. A Persuasive The Perkiomen School? I can see why this theory would be a blessing to parents. The type of therapy that I most intrigued by critical Burr is Facilitated Communication.
I first heard of this therapy in 1992. Facilitated Communication is teel essay Tilton, a method of helping an autistic individual express him/herself by giving physical support to an arm or fingers, enabling the individual to use a typewriter, picture board or alphabet board. This form of therapy is very controversial because of the fact that there is psychology, a facilitator and that the autistic individual does not do this on his/her own. When using this form of therapy it has often been typed by write for money The Windsor the autistic individual that he/she is critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton Academy, not retarded or stupid but intelligent (Society For The Autistically Handicapped, 1996.). Through my own research of a review Business School this treatment method, I have also come across stories where the autistic individual has expressed anger because he/she understands everything happening in daily life yet, can not express thoughts or feelings. There have also been stories of critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton Academy autistic children hiding under their covers at night with flashlights reading books and then typing the book word for word when using facilitated communication.
This amazes me! What if these children are just trapped inside themselves but, are cognitively and need help with emotionally the same as you and I? Although this treatment has not yet withstood the rigors of scientific investigation I do not see the harm in allowing it to be practiced. If it does in fact prove to be a scientifically sound treatment then the world of autistic individuals and Burr and Burton their families will forever be changed. It is clear that although autism has been a known disability for fifty years it remains a mystery. With so many varying characteristics, no sound cause and no treatment that is universal, there is much more that needs to be learned. Working with autistic children has shown me that there are in an in class essay Marian Catholic High School, fact many different types of critical thinking and Burton autism. Also, working with these children has made me wonder many things: Am I going to be the mother of a child with a disability, is that why I have ended up in this type of work? How do the need help with Braemar College, parents deal with having an autistic child? Why, do some parents appear so relaxed and comfortable with what life has handed them while others are clearly depressed? How does having an autistic sibling affect brothers and sisters? Wanting answers for these questions I turned to and Burton Academy, those who could answer them, parents of autistic children.
Donna Reagan, the mother of an help Braemar autistic child, touched me with her story. Psychology Burr? David, her son, is now twenty years old. Writing A Review Rotterdam? When asked how she felt finding out psychology and Burton, her child was autistic Donna responded, Basically, when I found out that my son was autistic, I was hopeful. Since then I have moved pretty much into write for money The Windsor School heartbreak and critical psychology Burr despair. I imagine the next step will be acceptance.
It seems to me that this is like the grieving process and we move from one step to another, it just takes longer when the object of your grief is teel, living. Donna has experienced other effects of having an autistic child. David was diagnosed at critical and Burton, age four and a half as being severely mentally retarded but, Donna knew this was not the case because of her own experience with this population. Donna was labeled as being in denial. This is an example of how much more needs to be learned about the characteristics of autism and as previously discussed the DSM-IV has taken the first step in clarifying the varying degrees of the disability. Donna's husband, a minister, was in denial, believing that God would heal their son and teel writing Tilton School make him a minister. Her husband had found an old encyclopedia that claimed the cause for psychology, autism was refrigerator mothers, as discussed earlier (Reagan, 1996). This lead to the physical, emotional and mental abuse of a review Rotterdam Business Donna. And the physical abuse of David at the hands of psychology and Burton his father. Class Essay Marian Catholic High School? Donna moved her family away from the man that was once her husband. It is not uncommon for critical thinking psychology Burr Academy, parents of an writing School autistic child to divorce, most do with-in the thinking Burr, first five years of the child's life.
Atop of The Perkiomen School what was going on with her marriage and critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy own life , Donna still had to care for a hyper autistic child. Class Essay Marian Catholic? She tells of times she found David ready to jump from a bridge into a creek, on the window ledge on their third story apartment and she says there are many other stories she could tell. David's safety was her biggest concern, with reason. David was eventually placed into a special care facility, Placing him was the most heart-wrenching decision I have ever made. David has been in psychology Burr Academy, placement care for a persuasive essay The Perkiomen School, ten years now. Critical Thinking Psychology And Burton? His father has seen him once. In two years he will again move to other placement. Donna's biggest worry, who will care for teel School, David when she is Burr, gone?
More and more I understand why people with special children pray that they will out live their children. I have begun to pray that prayer as well. Donna's story was the writing a review, first I received and it made me eager to receive more. I then received an email from Suzanne, the mother of a seven year old autistic girl. Before I tell Suzanne's story I would like to point out a common theme I have found among parents of autistic children, those who's children are young appear to be hopeful and optimistic whereas those who's children are older seem to realize that autism is a lifelong disability with many hardships. The most common theme I have found though is this; what will happen when I, the parent, am gone. Academy? Every parent I spoke with, those that I contacted through email and those I see each day at work with their children, expressed concern about their child's life once they had passed on. Suzanne expresses this very well, as you will see. Suzanne says that the diagnosis of her daughter was not a surprise, because the word had been thrown around so much in all of the tests that were being done but, she does say that, It is certainly a life sentence. Suzanne expresses the feeling of loss that can be felt by parents upon hearing the diagnosis.
No longer are there hopes for the child to accomplish all that the parents could not accomplish; no medical school, no academic scholar. Due to the stress of raising an a review Rotterdam Business autistic child Suzanne and her husband sought counseling for six months and have now learned to work through all of the emotions and responsibilities of having a special child together. Suzanne sounds tired and still in a stage of sorrow due to her daughter's diagnosis. Burr? She explains how the concluding a persuasive essay, family doesn't go out much, It is very tiring to have this kind of kid. Her and Academy her husband assume that their daughter will live with them until they are gone and class School yet, she speaks of the hope that maybe her daughter will be able to buy her own groceries, pay taxes and get a job she will enjoy. There are plans to critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy, set up a trust for their daughter to ensure that when they, Suzanne and her husband, pass on she will be taken care of. Suzanne ends by saying, We haven't given up on her yet but, we are also realistic about what may happen.
I would like to point out paragraph Hillfield Strathallan College, a couple that I know through work. Their daughter is critical thinking psychology and Burton, nine years old and I have taken a liking to her. She amazes me each day and I look forward to writing a review School, what she will teach me next. There are times when I wonder what she would be like if she were not autistic but, then I realize she wouldn't be the same little girl I have grown so close to. Critical Thinking Psychology Burr? I admire her parents greatly for their outlook on her disability. They both appear well adjusted and they treat her just as they do their other children. The mother even says that she is easier to writing a review Business, care for than her children without disabilities.
She, like Suzanne, says that she would like to see her daughter do things on thinking and Burton Academy, her own when she grows up but, she has no need to rush that time. As the writing essay Marian High School, mother of an autistic child, she says her daughter is her best friend, they do everything together. I know, from working with her daughter that she is not of the highest functioning autistic children but, she is not the lowest either. Her daughter understands when spoken to and will say things that are appropriate to the surroundings. I can not express how wonderful it is to work with this child.
And I hope that if I do have a child with a disability that I will have the psychology, same outlook as her parents do. An In Class Essay Catholic High? Most of the research that has been done concerning autistic families is how siblings are affected. In a study done by Royers and thinking Mycke in 1995, it was found that siblings of autistic children had a fair understanding of the disability and this finding was independent of write Strathallan age. Also found was the fact that children who have an autistic sibling rate their relationship with their brother/sister better than two siblings of critical psychology and Burton Academy which neither has a disability. From what I have seen at work, the siblings of the autistic children take responsibility for their brother/sister and at a persuasive The Perkiomen School, the same time do not truly understand why their brother/sister can't do such things for him/herself. I believe that there is a very unique bond between autistic children and their siblings. Autism is critical thinking Burr, a lifelong, developmental disability. The characteristics of the disability; little or lack of speech development, avoiding social contact or awareness and routines of behaviors are not experienced in the same degree for everyone living with autism. Teel Writing Tilton? The lack of a single identified cause for autism leaves much to be discovered in the field.
Theoretical causes, such as neurological and thinking and Burton Academy genetic, may prove to be a link to the true cause of the teel essay writing Tilton, disability. It has been shown that those living with autism may be helped, not cured, with available treatments. Such treatments include a high dosage of Vitamin B6 in the diet and Burr Academy the Son-Rise Program. A controversial treatment, Facilitated Communication, may allow autistic individuals a chance to communicate with the rest of the world without becoming frustrated at the inability to communicate. Parents of help with writing Braemar College autistic children deserve all the support and Burr and Burton Academy help they can handle. Business? By hearing Donna and critical Burr and Burton Suzanne's stories I have learned more about autism and the range of essay writing School emotions that are felt by parents than any textbook could of taught. Donna's story of basically having to start a new life due to having an autistic child and all the hardships she has gone through in trying to do the critical thinking Burr and Burton Academy, best for David. And Suzanne's hopefulness and clear feeling of loss due to essay Braemar College, having a young autistic child. I am thankful for all of the children that I work with and I treasure each day I spend with them and critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy all they teach me. I hope that their siblings realize how special their autistic brother/sister is.
Doing this paper and the research involved in it I have come to realize that I am blessed for having known each and every one of the autistic individuals I work with, for they may live in a world all their own but, every so often they let you in and that, that is teel essay writing School, a blessing.
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IELTS poverty essay writing competition. This is a new type of lesson for me – online anyway. This time I am not going to show you my essay just yet. Rather the plan is that I show you the question, I talk about the problems of the essay and offer you some help in how to write it, then you send me your essays. Then this time next week I will post my essay. I have now written my own essay on this topic.
Which you can find here. I really do suggest that you read through the essays in the comments below and think about what I say about them. The essays are full of good language and ideas you can borrow. My most general comment is that some of them seem rather ambitious models for 40 minute exam essays. You can read more about that here. I have also now had to close the comments section here: it broke the template of my site. The idea is critical psychology Burr this; you can often learn more from essays that are not quite right than a “model” essay. So what I am going to do is add extensive notes on the first 4 essays that are sent to me as a comment to this lesson. My comments will not be so much this is how to write a 5 paragraph Strathallan College band 6.0 or band 8.0, rather they will say what went right and what went wrong in the key essay writing skills. That I think can be a real learning exercise.
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You should immediately see that there are two parts to this question: to what extent do you agree and suggesting other forms of aid. Any answer must focus on both parts of the question. Developing countries have various problems: this essay though is only about eliminating poverty. An easy trap to fall into is to write about other issues. You can of course mention them, but only in the context of teel essay School, poverty and financial aid. There are different approaches possible here of course, but here are a few ideas. This is a complex essay as it involves two parts, it is probably simplest to answer the two questions separately. Simple tends to be good in exam circumstances.
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Read about the a persuasive essay, sort of things it does – great for examples in thinking Academy your essay. If this model of lesson works, I hope to repeat it at essay writing Tilton School regular intervals. To make it work, all I need is a few essays submitted as comments. Get more help with IELTS preparation on the main pages of my site. Keep up with me on Facebook - all the updates and even more advice there.
Or just get all my free lessons by email. 25 Responses to critical psychology Burr Academy IELTS poverty essay writing competition. Even though developing countries receive financial aid, poverty is still a problem. Some people believe that in order to eliminate poverty in developing countries other forms of aid are needed . To what extent do you agree or disagree? And suggest what other form of aid could be offered. These days, many NGOs and essay Marian School government organisations march under the banner of “Free African Nations” and ask for a small donation as millions of people living in developing countries often suffer from lack of clean water, sanitation and housing. The campaign to save the poverty-stricken public in developing countries, such as Kenya, has echoed in critical thinking Academy communities around the world, yet the problems still remain in those regions. Therefore, it is my firm belief that poverty reduction requires not just financial aid in a short term, but also strong governance to maintain a long-term prosperity. For those who are in desperate need of financial help in The Windsor School developing countries may welcome helping-hands from critical psychology, other developed nations economically.
This has proven to teel Tilton be a success story, especially in South Korea where a daily living expense was just under $1 per day in 1960s; however, with economic assistance from the U.S., South Korea is now considered to and Burton Academy be a developed nation helping other countries. Without economic loan from advanced countries, it could not have been able to see such a sudden rise in its economic status. Although the case of South Korea is a good illustration for a sound policy of financial aid, countries like Kenya are still struggling with their own internal affairs. Essay? Many critics of such policy claim that direct economic deal between government bodies has only critical psychology Burr and Burton worsen the concluding a persuasive School, problem, as corrupt politicians are only concerned with profits. Furthermore, developing nations may have a good reason to guise their own domestic issues under economic achievement, such as GDP growth, and psychology Burr and Burton this often contributes to justifying ill-managed financial support. For the aforementioned reasons, I would argue that financial aid is required for a short term, but fundamental aid comes from well-constructed governance.
Good governance often means less corruption, which will naturally lead to help essay writing College achieving poverty reduction. Critical? Take the example of Nigeria where the a review Business School, rule of law has been well managed and critical thinking psychology corruption rate has decreased as a result. This has helped a fight against the poverty there. Millions of people in Nigeria can now receive a free health care and housing support. As reading the information presented, one can now see that I agree with the view that financial aid can work in cases where strong presence of good governance is writing Braemar there already. It is therefore worth noting a direct contrast between Nigeria and Kenya.
If we are to succeed the combat against poverty, we should therefore keep a close eye on how governance is thinking psychology Burr and Burton structured or managed, regardless of one’s economic status. Wow. A simply fantastic essay. My Essay For Money The Windsor School? Whoever wrote this should have absolutely no problems with IELTS. There are mistakes in critical psychology Burr grammar and vocab, but these are outweighed by all the other excellent things.But I do worry slightly. My concern is this: is this an IELTS essay? It comes in at how to a 5 essay a massive 475 words – that’s almost double the required minimum. There’s no penalty that I know of for that, but the examiner is getting something that he/she is not expecting – and there’s a strong case for giving the thinking Burr and Burton, examiner what they are expecting. Use of examples.
One thing this essay does brilliantly is use examples to make complex points.I suggest you read how the examples are used in write a 5 paragraph Hillfield paragraphs 2,3 and 4 to see how you can use examples to critical Burr Academy argue about difficult ideas. This is model writing. Again, in writing class Marian Catholic some ways this is a model. The question is and Burton identified in the introduction as is the writer’s position, and essay writing Tilton then this is mirrored/repeated in the conclusion. The first content para talks about why financial aid can work and the second why it sometimes doesn’t. One problem comes in the third paragraph – does this suggest an critical thinking, alternative form of aid as required by the question? You could argue that it does.However, there is a real danger that “good governance” will not be interpreted as “aid” – it is a separate issue. I personally would have much preferred the writer to writing address the question more directly here (by using the words from the question) – directly say that another form of psychology Burr Academy, aid would be for help to be given in ensuring a system of good governance.
That way the reader/examiner can be in no doubt that both parts of the question have been answered. As it stands, I believe there is a danger that the examiner will read this essay as a re-interpretation of the question – something you cannot do. This is an interesting essay to School read. Brilliant vocabulary, wide range of grammar, but a surprising number of psychology and Burton, incorrect sentences. This matters because you will suffer penalties if too many of your sentences contain mistakes. Have a look a the concluding The Perkiomen School, first few paras: suffer from A (article) lack of clean water. not just financial aid in THE (article) short term. to maintain @ (no ARTICLE)long-term prosperity. where THE (article0 daily living expense (wrong word try cost of living)
There is a clear message here. All these problems are really just one problem. Thinking Psychology Burr Academy? Articles are a really tough part of English grammar (especially for speakers of some languages), but they are important because we use them all the time. The message is to firstly find out what they are and then to learn to check for YOUR mistakes. I love this essay but i wouldn’t try and write it in a language exam.If it has a problem with content, it is that it tries to be too intelligent. It’s key to remember that IELTS is concluding a persuasive a test of language, not intelligence. What you need to critical psychology Burr do is show you can write an answer to the question.
If you are an write The Windsor, academic person you may go wrong by trying to critical psychology Burr show off your ideas by answering a slightly different question. In recent years, post World Wars, most of the developed nations take keen interest and responsibility in Braemar providing aids to under-developed and developing nations. In spite of it, many countries are still trapped in this vicious circle of poverty for reasons being vast. Some people says that financial aid is not the lone solution for alleviating poverty related issues .I second the afore mentioned statement and believes that there are so many other means of providing help which I shall discuss. Firstly, many of the financial aids provided are not delivered properly to make the critical psychology, right use of it due to the government being corrupted and the lay people being uneducated .In many downtrodden countries, they become the victim of their own country’s corrupted government. Secondly, provision of money directly will not motivate or help people to live a better life out of poverty.
They need to know where and how to use the money judiciously to upgrade their living standard. Therefore, in my opinion, if the main motivation behind helping the Tilton School, poorer nations is to help them out of poverty, the Burr Academy, developed nations should adopt other methods of help. Providing help in educating the younger generation is one of the best ways to aid. One good illustration of educational help is through adopting scholarship programmes which doesn’t really facilitate giving money directly. One another important way is knowing the root cause of poverty and eradicating the chief causes. Last but not the writing an in class Catholic High School, least, fund providers should not give help to poorer nations through their government, instead should appoint United Nation agencies such as UNICEF or UNESCO in delivering help in means of man power or medical facilities. In conclusion, poverty is something which has been exist since the longest time but it can be tackled if right means were used.Finacial help is undeniably very crucial but there are certain other ways to help poverty in this world. This is a very good answer to the question – not an easy question to write about at all. For me, the critical thinking Burr and Burton Academy, best part of this essay is its clear and logical structure – using each body paragraph to address one half of the question. You have a great range of vocabulary here with some good word combinations “delivering financial aid” “adopting scholarship programmes” “knowing the root cause of poverty””use the money judiciously”. Just occasionally though, you do make little mistakes here “corrupt” not “corrupted”, “aid” is not a verb so you need to say this is one of the best ways to my essay School provide aid”, and I’m not quite sure what you mean by “facilitate giving money directly” – thats seems like a long word for the sake of critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy, a long word.
I also dislike “I second the afore-mentioned statement” – all you mean is “I agree” – don’t be afraid to writing an in High use simple language for simple concepts. There are more problems here and this, I suggest, is the area you need to work on most. Here are some of the problems you have: “most of the developed nations take A (article) keen interest” “much (not many) (uncountable) of the financial aid” “In many countries… they have become” – it is psychology Burr and Burton Academy possible to use “become” here but I suggest the present perfect is more accurate. “poverty is something which has existed (not has been exist) (passive and present perfect) “instead THEY should appoint” (missing subject) The question you need to ask yourself is whether you “knew” this grammar already. If so, you need to spend more time checking your writing and possibly building a checklist of your mistakes. Coherence and cohesion.
What you do get right is that the first sentences of each topic para do relate directly to the question: this makes your essay more coherent by giving a clear structure. You also have a nice range of connecting phrases too: “one other important way’ “one good illustration” “therefore” etc. But the thing that works best for em here is the way you use pronouns like “they’ to connect your ideas and sentences. Teel Essay School? simple but effective. Thank you so much for thinking and Burton Academy the feedback on my work.Like you have mentioned in your comment,grammar has always been my concern.I tend to neglect checking on my grammar many times during essay writing. I’ll work on my grammar better.Your advices are well noted and have been immense help. The issue of write for money The Windsor School, poverty in developing countries (or third-word countries, as they were once referred to) has been the subject of many debates. For many years financial support has been sent to these countries but it never seems to critical thinking psychology Burr be enough as these countries are still poverty-stricken. This triggered some strong reactions in the popular opinion; some think that the money sent by richer countries is not enough and the solution is teel essay writing School just to send more money while others think that by thinking and Burton, sending more money the problem will not be solved and other solutions must be put into writing an in class essay Catholic High School place. I tend to agree with those who think that sending money is not going to solve these deep-rooted problems. It would be much more important in critical psychology and Burton Academy my opinion to teach these countries how to build a healthy economy, how to grow successful crops, how to writing raise livestock, how to build infrastructures. Critical Psychology And Burton? This would not only write my essay for money The Windsor give them the tools to be self-sufficient in the future bit it will also make them more responsible in handling the critical psychology and Burton Academy, money they are given.
I would therefore suggest a two-pronged approach to this problem: to a persuasive School keep the money flow going as it is necessary to Academy buy the raw materials to build infrastructure, the seeds to sow, the cattle and so on a persuasive essay School while on the other hand send to these countries some professionals (engineers, agronomists, doctors, economists) to show and teach them how to thinking and Burton be independent from outside help. In conclusion, I realise there is no easy solution to this matter but I think that showering these countries with money will never solve their poverty problem unless it is paired with some help on becoming more independent. Bravo. This is The Perkiomen a truly excellent essay. You have some truly excellent words/phrases in psychology Academy here: “two-pronged approach”, “raw materials” solutions must be put into place” “countries are still poverty-stricken” “the tools to be self-sufficient” “a healthy eco.
nomy”. Write School? The best thing is that you use these words well in psychology Burr context and write for money The Windsor School have an obvious understanding of collocation (word combinations) eg “No easy solution” – do this and you don’t long/complex words. There are a few little things I could pick out:”This triggered” or “This has triggered” – are we talking about now or then? “Some help with becoming more independent (not “to”)” “to keep them money flowing” (not “flow”). These problems are few are far between though and thinking psychology Burr Academy are unlikely to cause you any problems in the exam. I would also say that you show a good range of a persuasive essay School, grammar too and that’s just as important – I particularly like the modal “would” in “I would suggest”. One thing to watch out for is commas. There is one type of critical thinking Burr and Burton Academy, comma you don’t seem to use at all – the one that separates two clauses: This would not only give them the tools to be self-sufficient in the future bUt, COMMA it will also make them more responsible in handling the money they are given. Coherence and cohesion. I commend you for your consistent use of “This” to link your ideas. Simple but very effective.
You address both halves of the task clearly and make your own position evident. Teel Tilton? It’s a particularly good conclusion as it both summarises your ideas and answers both parts of the question. A model really. Hi Dominic! Last night I saw your comment on critical psychology and Burton Academy Natalia’s work without realising you had commented on mine as well ! First of all thanks for giving me your opinion on help essay writing Braemar my work, I do realise now that my grammar was a bit sloppy.
It is true that I tend not to use the comma to separate teo sentences … Duly noted! In the sentence ‘ to keep the money flow going ‘ I used ‘flow’ as a noun … Was it wrong? Thanks again for your feedback. If i may say so this kind of feedback is critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy really invaluable and 100% more effective than theory alone. Even though developing countries receive financial aid, poverty is still a problem. Some people believe that in order to eliminate poverty in Rotterdam developing countries other forms of thinking and Burton, aid are needed . To what extent do you agree or disagree?
And suggest what other form of aid could be offered. Nowadays all developing nations around the essay The Perkiomen School, world are getting financial help from more Industrialised nations. Critical Thinking Psychology And Burton? Regardless receiving this help, poverty still is an issue in developing nations as money solves only short-term problems. I completely agree with the view that inorder to kill poverty, in less industrialised nations they have to receive other sort of help like education and jobs. Thanks to the developed nations who are providing financial help to the developing nations. There are two reasons why poverty is still a problem in developing nations.
One is this money that people receive in the form of aid will solve the short term problems like food for a week or month. Writing? We should not forget the corruption level in these less developed nations. Most of the money will go to bank accounts of politicians of that country. For these reasons financial help will not solve poverty problem in developing nations. Education is the most important thing that eradicate poverty.Firstly, If poor people gets higher education in the form of thinking Burr Academy, aid will have positive impact on their lives, as they will get a good jobs after their graduation. Secondly, Multi National companies should get more branches in developing nations which in turn provide more labour jobs in local area. An In Class Essay Marian School? As a result, on long term we can eliminate poverty by providing good education and proper jobs to the poor people. In conclusion, financial aid will help the less developed nations to solve short-term problems. To eliminate the poverty from critical thinking Burr and Burton Academy, these countries they have have receive educational and career aid from industrialised nations in help Braemar College addition to the financial aid.
Good job. The best thing about this essay is how you address the question and structure your essay. The problems you have are mostly “language” related. Your introduction and critical conclusion are models of an need help essay Braemar, effective way to address the question and establish your position. Burr And Burton Academy? I like the way the “mirror” each other. I also think the approach you take in teel writing School your topic paragraphs works very well. You address one part of the question in one paragraph (financial aid works in the short-term only) and suggest other ways to help in the other (education and critical thinking psychology and Burton Academy labour are related issues). This is clear and need help writing Braemar logical.
One “complaint” I have that is it would be slightly better to critical and Burton start your this paragraph in this way: “Aid to improve education and the labour market would be alternative methods of concluding essay, tackling poverty.” It reflects the critical and Burton Academy, content of the para better. You have a nice range of vocab that you use effectively. I like for instance: to eliminate poverty. When you go wrong it is by getting word combinations slightly wrong, e.g.: the problem of need help essay Braemar, poverty not “poverty problem” in the long term not “on long term” While you are mostly accurate, there are times you go wrong. This, for instance, is Burr and Burton not a complete sentence:
Thanks to the developed nations who are providing financial help to the developing nations. And here there are too many “little” things. Education is the most important thing (that) to eradicate poverty.Firstly, If poor people get (gets) higher education in the form of aid, this (word missing) will have a (article missing) positive impact on help writing Braemar College their lives, as they will get (a) (mistake with article) good jobs after their graduation. The question is, how many of critical Academy, those mistakes did you know? Only you can answer that. There are those who say that financial aid given to the developing countries is not going to eliminate poverty in an in class Catholic High School the long term. Burr? They argue that alternative forms of aids would be more beneficial to how to paragraph Hillfield Strathallan the people such as donating to charities.
In this essay, I am going to examine both sides of the critical Burr Academy, argument. The causes for poverty in teel writing Tilton developing countries are limited access to credit and capital market, environmental degradation, poor education and war among many others. Psychology Burr Academy? The most significant of all has to be government corruption in Catholic School some countries. For instance, Africa has been receiving financial assistance for the past 40 years, however the critical thinking, citizen of the countries are still poor and struggle to meet their basic needs. Need Help With Braemar College? On the other hand, the government officials are getting wealthier.
Another crucial reason is the credit and capital market in African countries, where the habitants are not able to trade, borrow and start their own businesses, as a result of corruption. An alternative approach to this issue is to thinking psychology Academy donate money through charities, such as VSO, which main aim is to improve people’s financial situation on School the long-term. This charity offers advocacy, education programme and and Burton Academy livelihood programmes etc. A Review? These programmes provide the residents with basic education and vocational training to find employment. Psychology And Burton? On the other hand, charities need donations to provide all these services; therefore it is not a permanent and long term solution. To conclude, people in developing countries need financial aid to a review Rotterdam Business School get out of poverty. However, I feel giving the funds to charities rather than government would be more beneficial to the citizen of the country, as charities keep a close eye on the money and are more focused on helping the poor rather than the local government officials. Okay, slightly briefer comments here. Good essay – well thought out with a nice range of language. A problem I have is with your first content paragraph. Critical Thinking Burr Academy? It doesn’t fit into the structure of the essay.
You say in your (excellent) intro that you are going to look at write School both sides of the argument and then you start talking about the causes of poverty. I suggest that this is “confusing” in a short 4 para exam essay and it feels that you are going slightly off topic.You can include this idea, but it would be much better done in a para beginning “One limitation of giving financial aid is that it does address the critical and Burton Academy, root causes of poverty” Thanks a lot for your comment! I do agree with your point. I always feel the need to explain the causes for the topic. I have my exam next week and an in essay Catholic School I am grateful for critical thinking psychology and Burton Academy your commands. It is true that, despite the concluding The Perkiomen School, international financial assistance, developing nations still face a serious problem of poverty. It has been suggested that there should be other ways, besides money, to help the disadvantaged in poor countries. In my opinion, a combination of both: targeted investments and some practical measures would work the critical thinking Academy, best.
The principal reason why the financial help to developing nations is considerably criticised is the write a 5 paragraph essay Hillfield, fact that it can provoke corruption in the local governments. In other words, it is not used according to its purpose. Though I agree with this argument, I believe that no developing economy is able to improve without foreign investments. In this case, targeted investments would be one reasonable suggestion. Critical Psychology And Burton Academy? For instance, it would be a good idea to create joint enterprises to build roads, railroads and other transport systems. A well-developed infrastructure can boost economic growth and, consequently, eliminate the number of the poor. Another way to write The Windsor School control the use of psychology Burr and Burton, financial help is to carry out write my essay for money projects directly in the country of need.
For example, some volunteers from Canada regularly collect donations in their community, purchase necessary equipment and then go to thinking the rural areas of Mali to with essay Braemar build water wells. Finally, help can be offered in and Burton the non-fiscal form. It is well-known that even basic needs of many poor people are unsatisfied. How To Write Paragraph Essay? Hunger, shortage of water, infectious diseases can be effectively addressed if packages of long-lasting foods, water supplies and vaccines are sent to the needed. My conclusion is that there certainly are grounds for concern over offering financial aid to critical thinking psychology Burr Academy the developing nations, however, measures of control as well as simple practical actions can be taken to make sure this help is with essay Braemar College used purposefully. Another really great essay. The intro is very well-written. You identify both parts of the question and thinking psychology clarify your position.
Any examiner reading the an in class essay Catholic, intro will immediately think “this person is on task” and a good first impression matters. As the critical psychology Burr Academy, essay continues it moves slightly away from the issue of poverty into the question of write a 5 paragraph Hillfield Strathallan, aid in general. I would be much happier had you returned to the issue of poverty much more explicitly in your conclusion. Superb. Here are just a few phrases that I like and people can learn from: My conclusion is critical and Burton Academy that there certainly are grounds for concern over. would be one reasonable suggestion. A well-developed infrastructure can boost economic growth.
There are also lots of more complex structures used well eg. if packages of long-lasting foods, water supplies and vaccines are sent to the needed. Coherece and how to write Hillfield College cohesion. You writing is extremely cohesive and the way you link sentences works very well. Just in critical thinking Burr Academy paragraph 2, I see. All the language is how to a 5 paragraph essay Strathallan there and more. Psychology And Burton Academy? My only writing an in class School recommendation is to Burr and Burton make 100% certain that you are addressing the question at need help essay Braemar all points in the essay. You have great writing skills. Dominic, would it be possible here to replace ‘the neeeded’ with ‘the needy’? Are they synonims ? Thanks.
By the way, I think this essay was really outstanding. Hi, Dominic. Critical Psychology? Thank you so much for your detailed answer. I agree that my essay is mostly about “other ways of aid”, rather than poverty itself. And this is my problem: I am sometimes confused what exactly should be MOSTLY addressed in an essay. For Money The Windsor? Could you comment on that, please? I saw the 1st sentence of the thinking and Burton, task as background information, so I didn’t write too much about poverty itself, but concentrated on the second sentence – suggestion that “other forms are needed”.
I expressed my opinion about this and continued with my suggestions of help. So, my understanding was that this task is how to write Hillfield Strathallan College mostly about the alternative help to the poor. It looks that I am not quite right here… Would it be enough to thinking Academy change just the writing class Marian High School, conclusion to sound more explicit? This is critical thinking my second attempt: My conclusion is that there certainly are grounds for concern over the poverty and my essay for money School multiple financial assistance in critical psychology Burr Academy relation to the developing nations, however, by means of targeted investments as well as small practical actions these issues might be addressed more successfully.
Thank you, Dominic. Okay. I need to be careful here. It is writing Business School possible that your essay would be read as an psychology Burr, appropriate response to the question. It’s just that it’s also possible that it may not be. That would be a shame because your English is great. My suggestion? Spend as much time as possible thinking before writing – you will have no problem finishing the task (250 words) and so it is essay School quite possible to spend as much as 15 minutes thinking. You still have 25 minutes to write.
More particularly I suggest you focus on quality of idea as opposed to quantity. Critical? This means that you select the idea(s) that best fit the question. This means not writing about some ideas. I think sometimes candidates get carried away by trying to give a “good” answer and show off all they know about the topic. Again, I suggest you focus on what I call the spine of the essay (introduction, topic sentences and conclusion). I will try and teel School explain this more when I write my own essay. But the general idea is to narrow the focus of your answer to the question itself. And, yes, I do prefer your second conclusion.
Thank you, Dominic. I see what you mean. Nowadays, there are many serious problems affecting societies and economic in many countries all over the world. One of these problems is poverty, which is thinking psychology Burr and Burton Academy considered as one of the most terrible ills of societies that needs to be viewed seriously and handled with care. In this essay I will discuss the issue in essay writing a greater depth along with the critical thinking and Burton Academy, possible forms of aids and solutions. Firstly, there is no one size-fits definition of poverty.
For example, the poorest people in an industrialized nation may well be richer than the average people of a less developed country. Poverty can be measured by income levels where in a one society some people are of writing essay Catholic School, high income while others are of a very low income. That is to say poverty can be more a human condition than an economic abstraction. Secondly, there are many international organizations (sometimes known as NGOs) that take poverty catastrophe and helping poverty-stricken through financial aid as their number one priority mission in developing countries. Although these organizations usually pay considerable amounts of money in order to eliminate poverty, still some people believe that foreign aid alone will not solve the global poverty problem, as it can be a solution on the short term only. Critical Thinking Psychology Burr Academy? They argue that the writing an in class Marian Catholic High School, problem has to Burr Academy be eliminated from the roots, by finding out the write paragraph Strathallan College, main causes of poverty and deciding on the best ways and practices to overcome this issue. For instance, there are many conditions that cause poverty, such as unemployment, inequalities of wealth and income distribution among individuals, as there is too little resources for too many people, beside governments’ corruption and bad policies. As a result of all mentioned causes, societies suffer from critical thinking psychology Burr and Burton, lack of money, homeless, famine, poor health care and concluding essay education. Consequently these result in very radical and critical and Burton Academy terrifying situations, such as children being abandoned by parents because of writing an in class Marian, inability to feed, clothe, and educate them, or crime rates become very high in the society.
In conclusion, I agree that foreign aid can be a solution for poverty on the short term, but at the same time, there are other forms of critical thinking Burr, aids that must be taken in my essay The Windsor School consideration in order to eliminate poverty in developing countries. People can work their way out by developing skills that help them escape its trap. Education can be the most important aspect to start with. I believe it can play a significant role in helping to alleviate poverty. This is an essay full of good language and ideas. You clearly have the potential to get a very good band score in IELTS. But there are definitely things to think about. 411 words – that’s not long. It’s really, really long.
There is no penalty in IELTS that I know of for too many words, but it’s not a good idea. Critical Thinking Psychology Academy? You want to essay try and select your best ideas and reasons and use them in an organised way. The danger is that when you write “too much” you lose control of the structure of the essay – especially in a timed essay .Here the particular problem is thinking psychology Burr Academy that you fail to maintain a consistent position throughout the essay and write a 5 essay Hillfield College a lot of critical thinking psychology and Burton Academy, what you write does not directly address the question. I don’t get any idea of your position in how to a 5 paragraph essay Hillfield College the introduction. To maintain a consistent position throughout the essay, you want to critical thinking psychology Burr indicate your view there.
Your paragraph 2 doesn’t really address the question. In an academic essay, you will define your terms – this is much less common in IELTS essays. It is possible that the examiner will “ignore” it as it does not directly address the question. Wasted words I’m afraid. Likewise, paragraph 3 does not address the question either just adds background info about NGOs. Write A 5 Hillfield Strathallan College? You want to be writing about and Burton Academy, how effective finance is in eradicating poverty and you haven’t done that yet. Also be very careful of write my essay for money The Windsor School, one sentence paragraphs – they are almost always signs of undeveloped ideas – as here. Your fourth paragraph is where you start to critical Burr address the question. The problem, for me, is that I have to work quite hard to see a “direct” answer to both parts of the write The Windsor School, question for thinking Burr and Burton Academy two reasons. You say what some people believe bit you don’t make what you think vey clear. I can guess what your opinion about the writing an in class essay Marian Catholic High, effectiveness of finance and other solutions – but I shouldn’t have to guess.
Your opinion only really becomes clear in your final para. Your “language” is mostly very good with some excellent phrases such as “inequalities of wealth”. The mistakes you do make are fairly minor “too few (not little) resources” and thinking psychology Burr and Burton “in (not on) the Catholic School, short term and one or two slightly misused words. My recommendation is that in the short term you work on: a clearer paragraph structure where you use the “topic sentences” of each para to thinking Burr Academy focus on the question (starts are always important) – a good tip is to try and help with writing make your paras roughly equal in thinking psychology and Burton Academy length. addressing the question(s) more directly. It is generally accepted that although the third world countries are supplied sufficient financial aids, they are still suffering from the poverty. In my view, there might be several causes for how to essay Hillfield Strathallan this such as the lack of efficient long term plans and issues in politics.
However, I believe that it would be ideal and also advantageous if these countries are given the chance to stand on thinking psychology and Burton their own. The immediate reason for the existence of poverty in teel Tilton School the third world countries is that they do not have a proper plan to psychology and Burton use the financial aids in a productive manner. A good illustration of this is WWWWW, my motherland. Teel? In 2004, after the massive destruction caused by Tsunami, we were given a huge some of money for the welfare of the affected people and to develop the infrastructure in the respective areas. But according to my knowledge, a part of this money went to the pockets of the psychology Burr, politicians because the government did not have a long term goal. Actually, the class essay Marian Catholic School, same example explains us the next cause, the selfishness of the critical Burr Academy, politicians, of the poverty. However, offering financial aids directly as money might not be a better solution to write for money School combat poverty of these countries. If this happens regularly, they might take it as a regard without making any firm efforts to be independent. To avoid this circumstance, other types of aids can be offered. For instance, scholarships can be offered to the outstanding students of psychology and Burton Academy, these countries.
Further, knowledge transfer programs could be arranged so that they will have the domain knowledge and they can try something new which is the teel essay writing Tilton, first step of being self-reliant. Personally, I am of the critical thinking Burr Academy, opinion that the many of the developing countries do not make sufficient hard work to be developed and they wait until the help comes from the rich with their mouths opened. Therefore, it would be more useful to everyone if non-financial aids are increased than releasing money to them. Then, they, of course, realize the writing Business School, value of the and Burton Academy, money and will work hard with better plans and good leaderships. This is my response to the task for competition. In this you tube era, third world countries obtain monetary assistance from wealthy nations in concluding The Perkiomen order to come out of poverty. Although getting fiscal support from western countries, poverty has become a pressing issue in our society of hard working adults. Burr Academy? This will be proven by looking at how to paragraph essay this problem in depth along with its other forms of aid and solutions.
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Pip’s education begins not in the formal sense of the word but within his own personal growth. He feels sure that if he were to become a gentleman, it would make him a better person and he would better himself within society. His ultimate goal is to become a gentleman and win Estella’s love. It is this desire that makes Pip unhappy with his life at critical psychology Academy the forge and the prospect of becoming a mere blacksmith. Pip’s education was very limited and although he was sent to evening school whilst he apprenticed to Joe, he learnt more in terms of a formal education from Biddy. With? He states?’At last I began, in a purblind groping way, to read, write and cipher’ (44;ch7) 5. Pip’s education is again typical of the Bildungsroman in that he is critical Burr and Burton, unassisted and self-educated.
His desire to how to write paragraph Hillfield leave the thinking psychology and Burton Academy forge is fulfilled when he is visited by Mr. Jaggers, who tells Pip of teel School his inheritance and thinking Burr and Burton Academy, the mysterious benefactor, whom Pip believes is Miss Haversham. This becomes evident in writing a review Rotterdam Business the novel when Pip states?’Miss Haversham was going to make my fortune on a grand scale’ (138;ch18) 6. This change from critical thinking and Burton, poor working class to a rich gentleman is once again typical of the Bildungsroman but not in the traditional sense. Usually a man has to work to earn his money and my essay School, become a gentleman, which is critical Burr, contrary to the way that Pip has earned his fortune. Teel School? Pip’s inheritance changes Pip from a likeable innocent character into one that desires unrealistic expectations for his life.
Due to his good fortune, Pip now looks down on his family as beneath him and critical psychology Academy, considers Joe to be common and uneducated. This is evident when he tells Biddy that Joe? ‘Is rather backward in some things. For instance in his learning and his manners’. (148;ch19) 7. Jane’s material wealth is once again inherited but this is in concluding a persuasive essay the final stages of her development as a character within the novel. This is where the similarities end between Jane and Pip, concerning money. Jane is critical thinking and Burton Academy, fully aware of the value of how to write essay Hillfield Strathallan College money since she has had to work to provide for herself. By inheriting she manages to secure her rightful place in society. Pip however does not know the true value of money and thinks that it is the answer to all his problems.
His snobbery becomes evident when he realises that his true benefactor is Magwitch, the convict, who he encounters in the first stage of the novel. On realising this fact he is disgusted that his benefactor is a murderer, a twist in the novel, which seems to teach Pip a lesson about gentleman in society. Pip realises that money does not make you a gentleman and Academy, real gentleman have qualities, which money cannot buy. Once again as seen with Jane Eyre, Pip leaves his home to embark on a journey of education, leaving the forge, which is situated, on the marshes, near the Thames for London. Rotterdam School? Again this conforms to critical thinking and Burton the typical Bildungsroman novel, where the main character will embark on a journey, usually leaving a small provincial town for the big city, in order to find his trade or occupation. Often this will be a disappointing experience, where hopes and dreams are shattered and a realisation of what they had left behind them was not so bad.
Although with Pip he does not work when he gets to London, Jane has to work as a governess in order to survive. It is in London that Pip embarks on essay Tilton School the next stage of his educational growth, in psychology Burr Academy order to find his real self. Pip squanders his money socialising in order to establish himself as a gentleman but by doing this he only succeeds in getting himself and his roommate, Herbert Pocket into serious financial difficulty. A Persuasive School? Pip feels sure that Mrs. Haversham intends him to critical Burr and Burton marry Estella and the realisation that this is teel essay writing, not so, does not enter Pip’s head until his encounter with Magwitch in London. Pip states?’Miss Haversham’s intentions towards me, all a mere dream; Estella not designed for me; I only suffered in Satis House as a convenience.’ (323;ch39) 8. Once again the similarity with Jane becomes apparent in that Pip experiences disappointment in matters of love. This conforms to the Bildungsroman, where the individual will encounter love affairs or sexual encounters within their educational journey, which are disastrous.
In the final stages of the novel there is psychology and Burton Academy, usually, according to the traditional Bildungsroman, a lesson to be learned before the character is fully matured. A Persuasive School? Pip learns just how wrong he was about what qualities make a true gentleman. This is critical Burr and Burton, apparent when he finds out his benefactor is a persuasive The Perkiomen School, Magwitch, the murderer. Although at first this was a shock for Pip, he realises just how much Magwitch has sacrificed for him by returning to England and risking capture by the police. Pip also feels guilty about the way he has snubbed Joe when he came to see him in London and the fact that he felt ashamed of him.
This embarrassment was evident when he stated that?’If I could have kept him away by paying money, I certainly would have paid money’ (218;ch27) 9. Pip realises the error of Burr Academy his ways and tries to make amends by helping Magwitch escape his captures. Teel Essay Writing School? He also finds out that Estella is Magwith’s daughter, which is ironic as Estella frowned upon Academy the working classes, only to be the offspring of something far worse, a criminal. Although Magwitch dies, Pip was by class School his side and gave him comfort in his last hours. After his illness he returns to the forge to Joe and Biddy, penniless since the crown reclaimed his inheritance. He has learnt a valuable lesson and critical psychology Burr and Burton Academy, has come full circle by returning to his roots without a penny, fully matured and understanding the real qualities of a gentleman. Jane also returns to her roots by attending the side of her Aunt Reed at her deathbed, only to find that the Reeds have suffered and writing Marian School, lost most of their wealth at the hands of psychology Burr John Reed. John Reed has received his comeuppance and died at an early age. When Jane inherits her Uncle’s money and write a 5 paragraph essay Hillfield College, discovers who her real family are, she returns to Rochester only to find out psychology Burr that he has been maimed in the fire at Thornfield. It seems that Jane has also returned to her past to find happiness with Rochester. She is now a lady and is accepted as Rochester’s wife in need essay writing College society.
Jane had to be a woman in her own right in order to be able to conform to society. Although Jane has fought for most of her life against critical thinking psychology and Burton Academy, the social order, in the end she does not challenge but upholds the values of society. Dickens and Bronte both express strong opinions in their novels about Victorian society. Dickens implies through the development of write a 5 paragraph essay Pip that middle class values were hypocritical. He suggests that moral values such as generosity and kindness were far more important than being rich and powerful. Dickens reinforces this by allowing Pip to become rich and then lose his money. If Dickens had allowed Pip to stay wealthy, then he would not have been able to emphasise his point to critical psychology Academy the reader. He also questions moral values through the character of Magwitch.
He illustrates that people of low social status are capable of possessing better qualities than that of the rich and powerful, who were considered to a persuasive essay School be far superior as human beings. By doing this he goes one step further and insinuates that the justice system is thinking, corrupt. He does this through the character of Magwitch, who is killed at the hands of the law and possesses the qualities that Dickens promotes. Bronte suggests that patriarchal society was hypocritical since men preached values that they could not uphold themselves. The rules were made by men and with essay writing Braemar, were allowed to be broken by men.
Rochester is allowed to take mistresses, which is accepted in thinking Burr Academy society but if had Jane become his mistress, she would have been considered an concluding a persuasive essay School, immoral woman. Critical Academy? Brocklehurst expected the patrons of his school to concluding School look plain, yet his own wife and children were decked with frills and curls. Bronte suggests that Victorian society promoted values that were one sided and treated women unjustly. University/College: University of California. Type of paper: Thesis/Dissertation Chapter. Date: 18 June 2016. Let us write you a custom essay sample on “Jane Eyre” and critical thinking, “Hard Times” as Bildungsroman Novels. for only $16.38 $13.9/page. Haven't found the essay Essay You Want? Get your custom essay sample.
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